Friday, October 18, 2013


Excerpt from A Submarine
by Ritzy A. Ritzhaupt © 2013

"Peggy and Handy Together"

They became as one as they loved each other sharing the deepest joy of being joined together. Their bodies shattered into tiny pieces. The room glowed with the vibrations of their newfound energy. They revelled in each other’s arms. They screamed in unison during their loving climax holding on with unbelievable strength as they reached the ultimate goal of being one. Handy knew when he inhaled her scent that she would always be beside him.

Peggy melted to him with their two hearts beating in unison. The aroma of heated sex filled the room. She knew she would love him forever. She wound her legs around his, refusing to let him escape. She felt him in her soul and in every corner of her being. The tender lovemaking by her oversized man filled her with joy that reflected in her eyes as the hazel color engulfed him. He surrendered completely shuttering one last time in pure joy. They continued to hold onto each other while wave after wave struck them, like the ocean crashing upon the rocks. They were exhausted but they could not let go. He bent down and tenderly kissed her forehead.

“Sweetie, no matter where I go, I will always carry you with me.” He reassured, cradling her to him, protecting her from all harm, as he cherished her very being.

“I love you so much, sometimes it hurts,” she expressed in soft sobs while he protectively rocked her until the tears stopped flowing and once again, she smiled.

Two emotional refugees adrift in the sea of humanity, had found each other. They each were surprised that someone could actually love them. They carried the burden of neglect and abuse, dragging each one of them down, as it had tried to drown them giving the earth two less people.

Together they stood strong and appeared tall like a golden statue, but shallow to a casual viewer. Their feelings and support for each other ran deep beneath the sea. They had each fought their own battles to survive to adulthood.  The grace of an added supporter gave both of them strength beyond that of a towering mountain. Each had withheld love from people who would only hurt. Now, they were freely able to share between themselves. Giving support to each other through any situation that would devastate most people. They were survivors and together they formed an unbeatable force with overflowing love. 

 Novel being written by a student in my class. Permission given to post.

2 comments:

  1. Woohoo, I'm published... a work in progress. ;-) Thanks Ariele! I also have some short stories and poems posted on my blog: ritzywords@blogspot..com

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    1. ritzywords.blogspot.com
      Guess I was tired when I put in wrong link. My bad.

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